Today I have made a digital poster explaining what KidsCan do to help others in need, we researched what KidsCan do to help New Zealand schools with lots of food and clothes for the kids. I have made a DLO to show you...
I like the poster you created for KidsCan. You work hard on your DLOs each week for our CIP and I enjoy seeing you share your great work to your blog. Keep up the great contributions to our CIP, I have really enjoyed working with you this year!
Thank you for responding to my comment, I am proud of how you remembered what good blogging etiquette looks like! I would say maybe try a new tool that's not part of the "Google" family. Could you record a video with Screencastify? Could you try making a cartoon or a Piktochart poster instead? I want to see you challenge yourself with the tools you select!
Hi Chloe it is Danni I really like this poster you have done it is bright and it pops out.it look like you have work hard on this blog post/DLO for CIP. you did a good intro. what is you fav part about this bolg that you did? bye
hi Chloe it is Bianca I really love the poster you did for kid's can I like the background with the stars and the rainbow background. maybe next time you could writ more from Bianca
Hi chloe. I really like your blog post that you have done it is really bright it is really cool that your DLO is bright colourful and you have worked hard on you blog is will I really enjoy it.
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Kia ora Chloe!
ReplyDeleteI like the poster you created for KidsCan. You work hard on your DLOs each week for our CIP and I enjoy seeing you share your great work to your blog. Keep up the great contributions to our CIP, I have really enjoyed working with you this year!
- Miss Birtch
Thank you Miss Birtch,
DeleteIs there anything I could improve on for my next DLO for tomorrow? I would love to improve them.
Hi Chloe
DeleteThank you for responding to my comment, I am proud of how you remembered what good blogging etiquette looks like! I would say maybe try a new tool that's not part of the "Google" family. Could you record a video with Screencastify? Could you try making a cartoon or a Piktochart poster instead? I want to see you challenge yourself with the tools you select!
- Miss Birtch
Hi Chloe it is Danni
ReplyDeleteI really like this poster you have done it is bright and it pops out.it look like you have work hard on this blog post/DLO for CIP. you did a good intro. what is you fav part about this bolg that you did? bye
hi Chloe it is Bianca
ReplyDeleteI really love the poster you did for kid's can I like the background with the stars and the rainbow background. maybe next time you could writ more
from Bianca
Hi chloe.
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog post that you have done it is really bright it is really cool that your DLO is bright colourful and you have worked hard on you blog is will I really enjoy it.
- Jessica Parker