Walt-To describe using adejectives and simmeiles.
For the last week we have been learing a bout bread.My literacy teacher Mrs McG (Mrs Mc Gunninity) Rolled some Coconut Rasin Bliss Balls so that we can eat them.First she put all the ingerdendits in 2 bowls.We had a blender to mix all the ingerdents.When all the Ingertents where mixed.My teacher
Coconut Raisin Bliss Balls
The balls looked like a new oaty planet with crumbled rocks on it.They looked like mud balls with rotten walnuts.They smelt like chocolate with smashed raisins on the top.The balls smelt like a coconut pudding with very strong coco on the top.They tasted oaty and strong.They were As tasty as a hot chocolate.I could hear the blender going noisy like road works.There was another blender going and it was so rough.The balls felt soft and bumpy.I was so relieved that it was so crumbly and crumbly.
