Walt-To describe using adejectives and simmeiles.
For the last week we have been learing a bout bread.My literacy teacher Mrs McG (Mrs Mc Gunninity) Rolled some Coconut Rasin Bliss Balls so that we can eat them.First she put all the ingerdendits in 2 bowls.We had a blender to mix all the ingerdents.When all the Ingertents where mixed.My teacher
Coconut Raisin Bliss Balls
The balls looked like a new oaty planet with crumbled rocks on it.They looked like mud balls with rotten walnuts.They smelt like chocolate with smashed raisins on the top.The balls smelt like a coconut pudding with very strong coco on the top.They tasted oaty and strong.They were As tasty as a hot chocolate.I could hear the blender going noisy like road works.There was another blender going and it was so rough.The balls felt soft and bumpy.I was so relieved that it was so crumbly and crumbly.
I love the way you have started your writing, it makes me visualise what it would look like. Perhaps next time you could include taste. How did you think it tasted?
ReplyDeleteIt tasted like hot choclate that is so hot that had just been made. Thank you for commenting on my blog Mrs Jack.Did you taste it? Tell me how it tasted if you did taste it?
DeleteI did. It was actually much better than I expected. It was sweet, and chewy and reminded me of a chocolate truffle.
DeleteWhat is a chocolate truffle Mrs Jack?
DeleteA very yummy treat made of cream and chocolate - not at all healthy!
DeleteWell no it won't be because it has chocolate in it. Also cream is not good for you. Have you ever had to make a chocolate truffle? If so can you give me the recipe?
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ReplyDeleteHi ma Chloe from Awahono School I like the pictures of bliss balls. It reminds me of my baking. I hope you can look at my blog.
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