Christmas Story

We are learning to make a story of Christmas. I made a long story but I also added alot of detail. Have a read and enjoy.

There was a Nutcracker outside all alone playing in the snow. It was Christmas eve and no one was playing with him so he had to cover himself with snow. He wanted to have someone to play with but he was not having much fun by himself. Suddenly there was a bounce on the roof

“ What was that?” cried the nutcracker. There was whispering.

“ lets steal the presents and ruin Christmas for the good girls and boys.” whispered a big voice from the roof.

“Yeah lets do it” said another quit voice.

“ I need to go and see what it is”whispered the nutcracker. Unfortunately it was Santa and his head elf trying to ruin Christmas.

“ But why is Santa trying to ruin Christmas on Christmas eve shouden`t it be on Christmas day. I do not think that they are the real Santa Claus and his elf. I think that they are an evil clone of them?” whispered the nutcracker softly.

“ Then where is the real Santa Claus and head elf I need to find them and quick.”cried the nutcracker.

“ Where is the presents!!. I WANT THEM NOW. Yelled the evil Santa Claus

“Calm down” said the evil head elf.

“NO. I WANT I GET IF I DO NOT GET I WILL BE GRUMPY!!” Screamed the evil Santa Claus.

Suddenly before they got the presents they saw another sleigh with no presents. There were two sleighs. “What is the other sleigh doing here” Scream the evil Santa Claus.

“What are you doing here?” Yelled Santa Claus.

“Go away Santa Clause I'm going to ruin your Christmas and you are going to stay out of it me and my evil elf are going to ruin this perfectly good Christmas for the good girls and boys.”

“No you won't I will save Christmas and you can't stop me”

“With all my powers let Christmas be ruined for all the good girls and boys bring all the presents to me.” As the evil Santa Claus sang.

“STOP” Cried Santa Claus. “Take my reindeer's my powers but just let the good girls and boys have there presents.”Santa Claus painted.

“Ok then” The evil Santa said softly.” Give your powers let the good girls and boys have there presents let me take Santa's Reindeer's and his powers.” Sang the evil Santa. The head elf stopped he cried so hard that the evil Santa had a chance of killing them both but before he could Santa Claus took the knife out of his hand and stabbed the Evil Santa right in the stomach.

“Leave him alone” Cried the evil head elf. Suddenly the head elf got the knife from Santa's hand and suddenly…. The head elf Stabbed the evil head elf and everything was back to normal. Christmas was back and it was nearly bedtime. The presents were back and the girls and boys had a wonderful Christmas and they enjoyed Christmas.

“HO HO HO Merry Christmas!” Yelled Santa Claus riding his sleigh.

I would like to know if you can make a story this long???

Have fun making one. That is only if you want to make one. If you do this is how. 1 you get a dice and paper and write down some Christmas Characters.

2 Write down some places.

3 write some settings

4 make some problems

5 make a story out of the ones you chose you can only chose one.

Alarm Call

We have been learning to write a story of a picture and put an unexpected twist to it.
I have done a story about The Alarm Call.  I had to reflect on the photo and also put a unexpected twist. My twist is at the bottom of the page. I hope you enjoy my story.Lets read!!

Alarm Call

“Is this a white soft marshmallow on this little spotted pillow?”  Said the Monster.  ”It looks so yummy to eat.  I wonder why it has legs on it and why has it got a smile?” He said when he was looking right at the cute Fluff ball thing.  He was going to crab it but suddenly the marshmallow moved.”  That's no marshmallow that is a kitten. I am not going to eat a tiny, small kitten because it will get hair in my throat.”

There was a Monster and a cute fluffy kitten just like a marshmallow.   This troll looks like a wicked, angry monster that is like 100 years old and never been found for some reason.  He has a big bushy beard that has not been brushed for ever. The old yucky thing has long finger nails that needs to be clipped really badly.  This monster has green skin with dark pink warts that need to be burnt off.  There is a kitten that is sleeping peacefully just like sleeping beauty.

The cute kitten had a wee smile on her as if she was dreaming about some delicious meat.

While the monster was creeping around the kitten it moved from sleeping to scare position.

The Monster bent down with his green warty hands and scooped up the little fuzzball.

Te Manu Tukutuku poem

This week we have been doing a poem about our new school. So far we are making a poem about Te Manu Tukutuku.I love our new school that has been bulit for us. I hope you enjoy my poem.

Te manu Tukutuku poem

I feel proud to have a brand new school.

I can smell the freshness from just like outside.

I can hear children gossiping about how cool this school is.

I can see shiny, shimmering shelfs with exciting games.

I have touched the cold whiteboard tables that are almost everywhere in the room.

I can feel like I am in another world like candy land.

By Chloe

Day #6 In New Zealand

This week or 2 we have been doing a learning journey for about 6 days now 4 last week and 4 this week. For our first activity is we had to write a poem if we were the only ones who had discovered new zealand. Well that was pretty easy. For our next activity we had to go on this site and put down   3 things that we would love to do. And for our last activity which is the bonus one we had  to watch 3 videos and put them from best to worst. Here is a slide show of all of my work...

Day 5 in Traviling

This week it is the 5 day and we are doing a learing jorney. For our first activity we had to write about 8-10b sentences after what happend when your group had left you and you were alone. For teh secound activity we had to do a famous person and you have to say when they were born 2 facts about them how did they become a famoyus. For the last activity we had to say if we would go to oatago central rail trail. Here is a slide show of what I did

Day 4 of going to New Zealand

This week we have been exploring New Zealand. Today we are swimmimg with the sharks. There are lots of activitys to do. For teh first activity we had to write things and go on this site to write down all the things they did to try and save the whales. For the Bonuns activity we had to say if we should bann fishing in farewell spit or stop doing it? I cosse t bann it so nothing happens to all the beutiful fish. There is more on this slideshow, have a look at my amazing work that I ahve done.
These are the links that I used to get all of the infomation from. The dead whales, Week 9 exploring New Zealand

Doubles and Halves Strategy

WALT: I am learing to make multipucaton problems easier by using doulbing and halving
In Maths I have been learing doulebing and halving.To Solve multiplication problems using this strategy.You must have a multerplucation problem to slove and if you have a 5 in it doulble it and if it is a even number you halve it.