I have done a story about The Alarm Call. I had to reflect on the photo and also put a unexpected twist. My twist is at the bottom of the page. I hope you enjoy my story.Lets read!!
Alarm Call
“Is this a white soft marshmallow on this little spotted pillow?” Said the Monster. ”It looks so yummy to eat. I wonder why it has legs on it and why has it got a smile?” He said when he was looking right at the cute Fluff ball thing. He was going to crab it but suddenly the marshmallow moved.” That's no marshmallow that is a kitten. I am not going to eat a tiny, small kitten because it will get hair in my throat.”
There was a Monster and a cute fluffy kitten just like a marshmallow. This troll looks like a wicked, angry monster that is like 100 years old and never been found for some reason. He has a big bushy beard that has not been brushed for ever. The old yucky thing has long finger nails that needs to be clipped really badly. This monster has green skin with dark pink warts that need to be burnt off. There is a kitten that is sleeping peacefully just like sleeping beauty.
The cute kitten had a wee smile on her as if she was dreaming about some delicious meat.
While the monster was creeping around the kitten it moved from sleeping to scare position.
The Monster bent down with his green warty hands and scooped up the little fuzzball.
Hi there Chloe,
ReplyDeleteI really like your post on the green monster and the little kitten. I like your plot twist at the end where the monster found the kitten cute and picked it up to have a cuddle. I also loved how you’ve drawn a picture with speech bubbles on it to support your story writing. Awesome job!
My name’s Jade F by the way and I am one of the bloggers for your school cluster in the Summer Learning Journey Programme over this summer holidays! I hope you come in and join the blogging programme this summer. There’s heaps of fun activities to do and many things to blog about, I reckon you’d love it. All you have to do is head onto the activities page and begin the activities. If you would like to have a look at your mates blog posts or other student’s blogs who are in the Summer Learning Journey with you check out the programme’s twitter feed here
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You can start in any order you’d like with the activities and once you have completed a task, post it onto your blog! The more activities you do, the more points you earn towards winning prizes at the end of programme!
Use the link below to get started and I hope to see your blog posts this summer!
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Jade F :)