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Friday, 15 December 2017

Christmas Story

We are learning to make a story of Christmas. I made a long story but I also added alot of detail. Have a read and enjoy.



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There was a Nutcracker outside all alone playing in the snow. It was Christmas eve and no one was playing with him so he had to cover himself with snow. He wanted to have someone to play with but he was not having much fun by himself. Suddenly there was a bounce on the roof
“ What was that?” cried the nutcracker. There was whispering.
“ lets steal the presents and ruin Christmas for the good girls and boys.” whispered a big voice from the roof.
“Yeah lets do it” said another quit voice.
“ I need to go and see what it is”whispered the nutcracker. Unfortunately it was Santa and his head elf trying to ruin Christmas.
“ But why is Santa trying to ruin Christmas on Christmas eve shouden`t it be on Christmas day. I do not think that they are the real Santa Claus and his elf. I think that they are an evil clone of them?” whispered the nutcracker softly.
“ Then where is the real Santa Claus and head elf I need to find them and quick.”cried the nutcracker.
Where is the presents!!. I WANT THEM NOW. Yelled the evil Santa Claus
“Calm down” said the evil head elf.
NO. I WANT I GET IF I DO NOT GET I WILL BE GRUMPY!!” Screamed the evil Santa Claus.
Suddenly before they got the presents they saw another sleigh with no presents. There were two sleighs. “What is the other sleigh doing here” Scream the evil Santa Claus.
“What are you doing here?” Yelled Santa Claus.
“Go away Santa Clause I'm going to ruin your Christmas and you are going to stay out of it me and my evil elf are going to ruin this perfectly good Christmas for the good girls and boys.”
“No you won't I will save Christmas and you can't stop me”
“With all my powers let Christmas be ruined for all the good girls and boys bring all the presents to me.” As the evil Santa Claus sang.
“STOP” Cried Santa Claus. “Take my reindeer's my powers but just let the good girls and boys have there presents.”Santa Claus painted.
“Ok then” The evil Santa said softly.” Give your powers let the good girls and boys have there presents let me take Santa's Reindeer's and his powers.” Sang the evil Santa. The head elf stopped he cried so hard that the evil Santa had a chance of killing them both but before he could Santa Claus took the knife out of his hand and stabbed the Evil Santa right in the stomach.
“Leave him alone” Cried the evil head elf. Suddenly the head elf got the knife from Santa's hand and suddenly…. The head elf Stabbed the evil head elf and everything was back to normal. Christmas was back and it was nearly bedtime. The presents were back and the girls and boys had a wonderful Christmas and they enjoyed Christmas.
“HO HO HO Merry Christmas!” Yelled Santa Claus riding his sleigh.


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I would like to know if you can make a story this long???
Have fun making one. That is only if you want to make one. If you do this is how. 1 you get a dice and paper and write down some Christmas Characters.
2 Write down some places.
3 write some settings
4 make some problems
5 make a story out of the ones you chose you can only chose one.

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