Bunyip Staying

This week we have been learing about persasive writing. perswasive writing is where we are trying to convice somebody to do something. We read a book called "A Bunyip in the billabong". We had to persade the villagers to stay in the billabong if we were going to be the bunyip. If we were the villagers we would be trying to convice the bunyip to move out of the billabong and move.

Dear Villagers

Please don’t make me leave my billabong. I have been in this billabong for over 110 years and nobody has been here to tell me to move out of my house. If you leave me here I will do and be:

a famous super star because I can get photos taken by the tours I will be really famous. I could even have all of my favorite foods when I get so famous.

If you let me stay I will be a real help for birthday parties and how they will be the best parties your kids could ever have. Parties are my thing I make it so that the kids have rides without  buying any rides.

I believe that I am able to not be so annoying  and make loud noises that wake up the Villagers. I don’t want to get everybody to wake up and scream.” It's a Bunyip. It is after us all!!!

AHHHHHHH.”

So you see I am really good. Please leave me in my billabong. It is nice how I like it. It does not need to be clean and clear, I hate that type of cleaness. So you can see I am a big help to the village. Please can I stay?

Sincerely

Sofie the Bunyip