First we took a photo of us in our hiding place.Next we had to take the photo and write where we were.
Friday, 23 June 2017
My Hiding Spot
This week in writing our task hide and seek we had to choose what type of writing we did.I chose a descripion.First we took a photo of us in our hiding place.Next
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Hi chloe I am Nikoli from Yaldhurst and LI like this story on a really bad hiding spot I think that you have use really good punctuation,in this story it sound like a cool spot to hide in.
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Hi Nikoli Chloe here
DeleteMaybe you could check you spelling and puntuchation in your reply