Looking Forward To Autumn
I can’t wait to smell the pancakes cooking in the hot pot on the oven.
I can’t wait to taste the toasty warm chicken noodle soup.
I can’t wait to see the colorful leaves falling from a amazing tree.
Here comes Autumn
I can’t wait to feel a woolly warm beanie on my cold head.
I can’t wait to hear the birds singing in the non leaf tree.
Here comes Autumn.
Hi Chloe, my name is Ellie from St Bernadette's School. I am year 6. I like how you said about the smell of pancakes, I like them too. Maybe next time you could have a colourful background with autumn colours or pictures. Great poem, keep up all the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi Chloe, my name is Ellie from St Bernadette's School. I am year 6. I like how you said about the smell of pancakes, I like them too. Maybe next time you could have a colourful background with autumn colours or pictures. Great poem, keep up all the good work.
ReplyDeleteSorry I can not because I tried and it did not work because you can not put a backround on a post And thank you already for your reply.
DeleteKind Regards
Chloe :D :)
Thank you Ellie I can do that for you.
ReplyDeleteHello Chloe, my name is Anisia from St.Bernadette's Primary School.I have to agree with Ellie I love the smell of pancakes in the morning too.Your poem really relates to autumn in my opinion.Maybe next time you could make it sound more rhyme like.Hope to see more of your amazing work.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your feedback Anisia.
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